Welcome to Physics 416. This course is designed to teach you to
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Your instructors are
Jean-Francois
Van Huele and
Michael Ware. We are
happy to meet with you, but haven't found formal office hours to be very effective for
this course. Feel free to just stop by and ask brief questions, but if you want to have
a longer discussion (say, to review a manuscript) please email us to set up an appointment.
This semester we will work together to become better writers. Together we will work through a number of exercises to achieve this goal, the most significant being your senior thesis. We expect that you will regularly attend and participation in class discussion, give appropriate feedback to peers, and integrate academic and professional standards into your writing.
You will be evaluated on your writing and communication skills, and on your mastery of course materials. This course is taught as a sequence of two block courses (416A and 416B), and you will receive a letter grade on your transcript for each portion. The letter grade will be determined using the following breakdown:
Points for thesis, other homework, and participation assignments have different weights in the final grade; they should not be compared directly. Assignments need to be turned in on time, and should be turned in electronically unless explicitly stated otherwise. Since some assignments require the input of your research advisor, you will want to share these assignments with your advisor well in advance of the deadline. We will highlight these assignments in red on the schedule.
You can check your grades and submit assignments here
This schedule will be regularly updated throughout the semester. Thesis (T) and homework (H)assignments are due two hours before class starts (8:00am) on the days listed. Quiz assignment (Q) will be collected at the beginning of class. Late assignments will receive 50% credit up to 24 hours after the deadline. After the 24 hour period, no credit will be given but we will still provide feedback on the assignment if you request it.
| Date | Class Topic | Assignments Due | |
| W | Jan 4 | Pretest | |
| F | 6 |
Course Overview Introduce H1 and T1 Introductions |
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| M | 9 |
Logical flow of a thesis Introduce T2 In-class review of T1 |
Q1. (10pt) Homonyms H1. (5pt) So you have to write a senior thesis (Online) T1. (5pt) 50 word summary of your thesis (Online) |
| W | 11 |
Introduce T3 and T4
In-class review of T2 |
Q2. (10pt) Capitalization H2. (5pt) Effective Titles (Online) T2. (15pts) Outline of your thesis. (Online) |
| F | 13 |
Introduction to LaTex Equations in LaTex The department class file |
Q3. (10pt) Compound Words H3. (5pts) LaTex Introduction (Online) T3. (5pts) Title of thesis (Online) |
| M | 16 | Holiday | |
| W | 18 |
Introduce T5
References The paragraph |
Q4. (10pt) Abbreviations, Acronyms, Initialisms. T4. (15pt) Revised Outline (Online) |
| F | 20 |
Visit HBLL Data base searching (JC) |
H4. HBLL assignment
H5. search survey (5pts) |
| M | 23 |
Introduction to BibTex Structure of a paragraph Introduce T6 |
Q5. Latin Phrases H6. Fill out library post survey (2pts) T5. Write a section of text for "Chapter 1" of your thesis with 300 words or more. (5pts) |
| W | 25 |
Topic sentences and paragraphs Introduce H8 |
Q6. Parentheses H7. Fill in you BibTex .bib file and submit a pdf of your bibliography |
| F | 27 |
The lard factor In-class review of H8 Introduce H9 |
Q7. Dashes H8. Find and underline the topic sentences in the following three texts: “What’s wrong with this prose?” by N. David Mermin, Physics Today 42, 5, 9-11 (1989), “Motivation” by Mark Transtrum, Senior thesis, BYU (2006), and this letter. |
| M | 30 |
Review H10 Introduce H11 |
Q8. Plurals and Possessives H9. Revise this text using the principles discussed in "The Lard Factor. |
| W | Feb 1 |
Pictures, Schematics, and Diagrams Introduce T7, T8, and H12 |
Q9. I and We T6. A first draft of Chapter 1 (background) in a format like this, where rough spots and planned expansion are noted. Your draft will be graded according to these criteria. (20pts) H11. (5pts) Look through the thesis archive and find two examples of excellent figures, and two examples of figures that need some help. |
| F | 3 |
Graphs Introduce H13 |
Q10. Commas H12. Make a publication quality schematic or drawing (preferably for your thesis) and turn in the publication quality pdf (10pts) |
| M | 6 |
Tables Introduce H14 |
Q11. Colons and Semicolons H13. Make a publication quality graph (preferably for your thesis) and turn in the pdf (10pts) |
| W | 8 |
Introduce T9 Work on thesis |
Q12Units T7. A first draft of Chapter 2 (Method/setup/process/etc.) We will use the same grading criteria as in T6 for this chapter. (20pts) H14. Make a publication-quality table (preferably for your thesis) and turn in the pdf (10pts) |
| F | 10 | Work on thesis | T8. Create a list of the figures and graphs that you will include in your thesis. Put references to these figures in your thesis and create a list of figures. Submit the list of figures page. |
| M | 13 |
Abstracts Introduce H16 and H17 |
Q13. Numbers |
| W | 15 |
Peer-review of abstracts Introduce T10 |
Q14. Equations T9. Write a first draft of Chapter 3 (results/conclusions). Your draft will be graded according to these criteria. (20pts) T10. Write an abstract for your thesis H17. Write an abstract for the Student Research Conference |
| F | 17 | Work on thesis / Interviews |
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| M | 20 | Holiday | |
| Tu | 21 | Work on thesis / Interviews | Q15. Review |
| W | 22 | Work on thesis / Interviews (10:00 Aaron Smith, 10:25 Steven Clouse) | |
| F | 24 |
Last Day of Block A Grammar test Introduce T11 and H15 Work on thesis / Interviews (10:00 Ben Christensen, 10:25 Stuart Harper) |
T11. Revised chapter 2, focusing on clarity and content. Assignment will be graded according to these criteria. (60pts) |
| M | 27 |
Reading Introduce H18 |
Q16. Adjective Clauses H15. Read this text and follow the instructions at the beginning. Read this text and one of the references in your thesis and be prepared to discuss them in class (5pts) |
| W | 29 |
Refereeing and responding to criticism Introduce H19 |
Q17. More Equations H18. Select a section of approximately two pages from your thesis for another student to review |
| F | Mar 2 | Work on thesis / Interviews (10:00 Blake Stauffer, 10:25 KC Erb) | H19. Write a referee report of your peer's work (at least half-page, single spaced) |
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5 6 |
Work on thesis / Interviews (10:00 Ryan Sandberg, 10:25 Nathan Rock) Introduce H20 Intervier (12:00 Joseph Rawlins, 12:25 Nathaniel Cook) |
Q18. Sentences
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| W | 7 |
Ethics Introduce T12 |
Q19. More Sentences
H20. Read ONE of the three cover story articles in the ethics (November 2004): Ethics 1, Ethics 2, Ethics 3. Comment on the contents of the article: did you learn anything new? Did anything strike you as particularly relevant to this class? |
| F | 9 |
Making a useful index and appendices Introduce H21 Work on thesis / Interviews (Matt Rytting 10:00) |
T11. (80pts) Complete revised draft of the thesis, including majority of graphics, all equations, and a completed bibliography. This draft should be given to your advisor for feedback. Please be respectful of their time and give it to them promptly (at least by the due date for T10) so they can have time to give you feedback before the final draft is due. Assignment will be graded according to these criteria. |
| M | 12 |
Designing a talk Introduce H22 |
Q20. Review H21. Complete the index for your thesis. |
| W | 14 |
Giving a talk Introduce H23 Lauren Richey @ 2:00 |
Q21. Review H22. Make a complete draft of your student research presentation. All text should be in place, but graphics need not be finished. |
| F | 16 | Practice student research conference talks |
Q22. Feedback to peers on talk (completed in class)
H23. Make a final draft of your student research presentation, and be prepared to give it |
| Sa | 17 | Student research conference | |
| M | 19 | Curriculum Vitae and Resume | H24. (5pts) Read these CVs and resumes (1, 2, 3, 4) |
| W | 21 | Writing for a popular audience |
H25. (5pts) Find and read an article from a popular news site that details a scientific research result.
Focus on the style of writing and come to class prepared to discuss this style H26. (15pts) Create a CV H27. (15pts) Create a resume |
| F | 23 |
Persuasive writing
Introduce H29 and H30 |
H28. Write a press release targeted to a popular audience (think of a typical Daily Universe reader) about your thesis research (20pts) |
| M | 26 |
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| W | 28 |
H29. (20pts) Write a memo to the department chair H30. (20pts) Nomination Letter |
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| F | 30 |
Thesis due at 5:00pm |
T12. Final draft of completed
thesis. Review your advisors comments on T10 and incorporate them in
this final draft. (120pts)
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| M | Apr 2 | Writing a scholarly paper |
Q25. (5pts) Choose a journal for your scholarly paper and look up the formatting requirements.
Turn in the name of the journal and the source (e.g. web site) for the formatting requirements. |
| W | 4 | ||
| F | 6 | Writing a grant proposal |
H32. (40pts) Write an introduction to a
professional journal article paper. The introduction should be at
least 500 words in length. Q26. (5pts) Create a list of five potential funding sources for research in your thesis research area. Include the contact information for the source (e.g. web site) |
| M | 9 | Review of Scholarly Papers | Q27. (5pts) In-class review of scholarly papers |
| W | 11 |
Q28 Grammar Final Quiz (20 pts) Course Wrap-up |
H34. (20pts) Write a propsal for ORCA funding (see
the ORCA web site for details) Q29. (5pts extra credit) Fill out the BYU class evaluation. Check the box to release the fact that you filled it out to receive credit. |
Honor code
We expect all students in the class to abide by the BYU honor code. We encourage collaboration between students in this class, except when we state explicitly that the work is to be done individually. Writing in physics requires its own code of ethics, which we will encounter and discuss in class.
Preventing sexual harassment
BYU's policy against sexual harassment extends not only to employees of the university but to students as well. If you encounter sexual harassment, gender-based discrimination, or other inappropriate behavior, please talk to your instructors, contact the Equal Employment Office at 422-5895 or 367-5689, or contact the Honor Code Office at 422-2847.
Students with disabilities
BYU is committed to providing reasonable accommodation to qualified persons with disabilities. If you have any disability that may adversely affect your success in this course, please contact the University Accessibility Center at 422-2767. Services deemed appropriate will be coordinated with the student and instructors by that office.